A Paradigm Shift Poem by Dr subhendu kar
A Paradigm Shift
My captive will knackered so long within
Exasperates me while making a new breath
yet baited overwhelmingly to my stance eclectic
as when stepping in to my time overpowering.
My secret search of dream in the corridor of quest
quite unknown and undeciphered yet undefined
to my whole being, being wishful to reason unknown
while putting me into the random strokes undeterred.
A gesture unwholesome as I do feel imbecile
Under the follies of someone’s fear or favor fretful
For a breakthrough to find a way out of helplessness
Like thrilled fiction reading impassioned and unveiled.
Let the surging caravan loosely spread uncared
Be well tamed and couched to their need primed
Cutting down all the smooching songs of life imposed upon
Be sung reveling all my impulses being hurriedly streaming
An excellent pattern distribution.... Hurriedly streaming may relate to the exponential growth of every new breath given.... One Peace at a Time... Deana
'paradigm shift' as a phrase is very much becoming a cliche this poem placed it back into its depth
To write in Peter Beagle's wordings 'Heroes know that things must happen When it is time for them to happen. A quest may not simply be abandoned; Unicorns may go unrescued for a long time, But not forever; A happy ending cannot come In the middle of the story.” A shift is a must You may call it 'A Paradigm Shift' In fulfilling a quest. Very nice one. Enjoyed.
Such a masterful use of language, entwining imagery w/ rhetoric and producing a fine tapestry of mood. Great work.
My secret search of dream in the corridor of quest -like this line. I like the style of the poem, the way it was written, interesting.
I too am addicted to the eclectic sensuality abounding in all domains! We were born in the same year - though worlds apart, so close at heart, poets rule! May Peace Prevail On Earth
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 3:05:33 AM # 1.0.0.1119
a great write.....you master at your wrk........and i think i m kindda falling for ur poems..... lol........ a gud write......... regards dolly