Timothy Weiermann

Rookie (Friday, August 13th,1993 / Tucson, Arizona)

A Part Of Two - Poem by Timothy Weiermann

The sun is sinking,
While her mind is thinking
My skies are blinking,
Blinking from dark to bright
It all depends upon the light
The light in her eyes
They control my skies

What must I sew?
Where can I sew us together?
However can we survive the weather,
The weather that tears others apart
When all we have is a single heart

Where do we go?
Where can I go?
Where?
When I’m only a part of two


Comments about A Part Of Two by Timothy Weiermann

  • Rookie Aaron Combs (3/13/2009 3:04:00 PM)

    You got some talent! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 16 Points Trinidad Villafranca (1/6/2009 9:45:00 AM)

    this is so deep and beatuiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Brittany graviet (10/6/2008 9:44:00 PM)

    your thoughts flowed very well in this peice, flowing stedily from thinking to questioning. that is good in a young writer like yourself (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (8/29/2008 2:44:00 PM)

    a 10 for this ammmmmazing composition. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tissa Calvert (8/26/2008 2:32:00 PM)

    nice job that is an awsome and heart felt poem (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 511 Points Robert Rorabeck (8/22/2008 1:20:00 PM)

    Timothy, excellent write! I certainly couldn't write like this at 15- not sure I can now.... keep up the good stuff.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie O Anna Niemus (8/22/2008 9:05:00 AM)

    a thought provoking poem

    the rays of your love are threads with which your stitching heart
    sews you 2 together

    the highest path is surrender to God's will about whom to be with..
    few of us achieve that path (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Miss Unknown Empty (8/20/2008 3:20:00 PM)

    Very deep it really makes one think. I really enjoyed it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (8/19/2008 8:44:00 PM)

    hey Tim,
    beautiful imagery with the sun and the skies
    and the light in her eyes
    what else is there to sew! ! ! ! ! ! !
    when your only a part of two

    You have great potential though so very young--very matured and intelligent
    keep up your beatiful writes. I love to read your poems.+++++++++++++++++++100000000000000000000000

    love anjali (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 23 Points Jim Norausky (8/19/2008 4:37:00 PM)

    Nice poem. I like the poetic whirlpool in the first paragraph. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dee Daffodil (8/19/2008 3:29:00 PM)

    I like the imagery...be sewn together seems like a fresh idea. Nice work.
    Hugs,
    dee (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Nicolas Del Homme (8/19/2008 3:25:00 PM)

    This is really good...You and the Girl share the same heart. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 19, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, August 22, 2008


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