Treasure Island

Timothy Weiermann

(Friday, August 13th,1993 / Tucson, Arizona)

A Part Of Two

The sun is sinking,
While her mind is thinking
My skies are blinking,
Blinking from dark to bright
It all depends upon the light
The light in her eyes
They control my skies

What must I sew?
Where can I sew us together?
However can we survive the weather,
The weather that tears others apart
When all we have is a single heart

Where do we go?
Where can I go?
When I’m only a part of two

Submitted: Tuesday, August 19, 2008
Edited: Friday, August 22, 2008

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  • Brittany graviet (10/6/2008 9:44:00 PM)

    your thoughts flowed very well in this peice, flowing stedily from thinking to questioning. that is good in a young writer like yourself (Report) Reply

  • Robert Rorabeck (8/22/2008 1:20:00 PM)

    Timothy, excellent write! I certainly couldn't write like this at 15- not sure I can now.... keep up the good stuff.... (Report) Reply

  • O Anna Niemus (8/22/2008 9:05:00 AM)

    a thought provoking poem

    the rays of your love are threads with which your stitching heart
    sews you 2 together

    the highest path is surrender to God's will about whom to be with..
    few of us achieve that path (Report) Reply

  • Anjali Sinha (8/19/2008 8:44:00 PM)

    hey Tim,
    beautiful imagery with the sun and the skies
    and the light in her eyes
    what else is there to sew! ! ! ! ! ! !
    when your only a part of two

    You have great potential though so very young--very matured and intelligent
    keep up your beatiful writes. I love to read your poems.+++++++++++++++++++100000000000000000000000

    love anjali (Report) Reply

  • Dee Daffodil (8/19/2008 3:29:00 PM)

    I like the sewn together seems like a fresh idea. Nice work.
    dee (Report) Reply

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