A Partner Poem by Robert Leary

A Partner

Rating: 5.0


A partner’s got to have your back
No handshake cloaked handout
He’s got to be there
Thick or thin
Holding up the space you’re in
Through rapids
And perhaps a fall
To rocks below
Where able to climb out
You pick up and start again
A partner’s got to have your back

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cynthia Buhain-baello 01 December 2009

I like this because it is complete and cutting, has a definite point/idea, and starts with a premise ending in a conclusion. The lines are relevant to the idea, not 'hanging' or a rambling or words and your arrangement of the verses is just right. Great work! 10+ Cynthia Buhain

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Robert Leary

Robert Leary

New London, Connecticut
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