hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 10,433 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

A Place Called


place called “home” is to feel homely,
God’s creation standing by to look so lovely,
May be she is with all her elegance,
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  • Gold Star - 10,433 Points Bethany Williams (3/20/2010 9:06:00 PM)

    Such beauty in a great poem. Great words used in this poem.. I had such a great time reading this....10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,433 Points Chitra - (1/29/2010 10:00:00 PM)

    A 10++ for sure. A beautiful write about the place where we find happiness and solace! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,433 Points Lean Punio (1/2/2010 2:03:00 AM)

    a home is a place that you will find love and care...
    respect and peace are there when i go home...
    i'm going home now co'z i found the emptiness when i'm alone
    every single minutes my home keeps waiting for me to go back! ! !
    beautiful poem! ! !
    I'm going home! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,433 Points Liz Annson (12/13/2009 11:00:00 PM)

    a place called house is where we stay
    a place called home is what we make
    thank you for sharing this with us... a beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sahar Sahar (12/6/2009 2:44:00 AM)

    A beautifuly described structure of home and its atmosphere, we dwell, with our life, ....with all serene and tranquil breaths....... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Maria Shipka (12/4/2009 5:52:00 AM)

    the worst on PoemHunter is that the steals the comments and then a man must again write once again... so I liked thod you poem much! I felt as of it breathes the LOVE&PEAVE&HAPPINESS...and I wish you it of all my heart :)
    Thank you for sharing and +10 is yours :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 264 Points Louis Rams (11/8/2009 6:15:00 PM)

    like the song says 'a house is not a home when there's no one there'
    good write! a ten (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 264 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (11/7/2009 8:40:00 AM)

    it seems that hundreds have already rated and commented this poem and all of them gives this one a thumb up. I think it deserves it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 773 Points Ken E Hall (11/2/2009 6:50:00 PM)

    Home is the core of our being and your poem spells it out pefectly,
    every little thing in it is part of us our history -nice thoughts through out
    God's creation ++++++++++++10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 773 Points Clara Odelia Ciutara (11/1/2009 3:13:00 AM)

    “Home” is an end of universe,
    Does not come as surprise and need to rehearse,
    It is place where even HE may prefer to stay,
    Heaven here, hell here, we need only to create the way

    Nicely written, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 135 Points Antonio Liao (10/22/2009 9:51:00 PM)

    a timely poem for global warming.....excellent view of what life
    meant to be in touch....with what we call it Home... great as the
    vision of God, a place where nothing worries our fear not; for not
    even the angel, would dare to listen to our gnashing teeth... a paradise
    Poem of this century...thank you for sharing God bless....a 10 ++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 135 Points Njabulo Mkandla (10/20/2009 4:56:00 PM)

    messege heard loud and clear. i'm still trying to get with your half finished way writing. i assume it make your messege more direct and in your face, yet also asking you look further to find completion. i would love to hear what you have to say about my comment. you can dropp me a messege (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 135 Points Raven Bishop (10/17/2009 11:31:00 PM)

    The essence of home should be embraced with warmth.
    I loved this message clear and outloud. (Report) Reply

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