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Dee Corpolongo

(09/ 27/64 / New York)

A Place No One Has Known



There is a place that only I know of
for it is buried beneath the many tears
A place where love is abundant and real
and beauty surpasses throughout all the years

Where the pains felt are totally absent
and all the misery is far behind left alone
Where this place that we live is so amazing
where the oceans never leave an unturned stone

This place is so far from reality it seems
that it is all just another made up dream
but the beauty of the forest and flowers
seemingly was Natures original scheme.

Submitted: Monday, June 03, 2013
Edited: Friday, August 02, 2013

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Someone requested a poem be written about various titles/subjects, and this is what I chose and wrote in the last 5 minutes....short, but from the heart, as always! ! ! !

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  • Valsa George (12/23/2013 12:22:00 AM)

    A place where love is abundant and real
    and beauty surpasses throughout all the years

    Such a place is so hard to find! Yet, let us all keep within such a dreamy world beneath the surface of a disturbed world, scarce in love and true friendship! A truly lovely write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (8/29/2013 5:49:00 PM)

    that special place is where I retreat to from time to time wish you could go there with me. lovely write (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (6/6/2013 9:00:00 AM)

    Love your heart is this.... Dee If only so many could skip the misery. Great write, (Report) Reply

  • Thomas A Robinson (6/6/2013 4:48:00 AM)

    I think we all know this place for it lives in a dream within us. Sometimes dreams can be taken
    out and played with before we have to put them away. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (6/3/2013 1:14:00 PM)

    Beautiful Dee, and all in five minutes - you are so clever. We all need a special place within us, where we can withdraw and contemplate all the beauties of life and nature. Great stuff. And thank you for your recent comments Dee, very much appreciated. xx (Report) Reply

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