Learn More

Dee Corpolongo

Rookie - 24 Points (09/ 27/64 / New York)

A Place No One Has Known



There is a place that only I know of
for it is buried beneath the many tears
A place where love is abundant and real
and beauty surpasses throughout all the years

Where the pains felt are totally absent
and all the misery is far behind left alone
Where this place that we live is so amazing
where the oceans never leave an unturned stone

This place is so far from reality it seems
that it is all just another made up dream
but the beauty of the forest and flowers
seemingly was Natures original scheme.

Submitted: Monday, June 03, 2013
Edited: Friday, August 02, 2013

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Someone requested a poem be written about various titles/subjects, and this is what I chose and wrote in the last 5 minutes....short, but from the heart, as always! ! ! !

Comments about this poem (A Place No One Has Known by Dee Corpolongo )

Enter the verification code :

  • Gold Star - 12,580 Points Valsa George (12/23/2013 12:22:00 AM)

    A place where love is abundant and real
    and beauty surpasses throughout all the years

    Such a place is so hard to find! Yet, let us all keep within such a dreamy world beneath the surface of a disturbed world, scarce in love and true friendship! A truly lovely write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 8,971 Points Heather Wilkins (8/29/2013 5:49:00 PM)

    that special place is where I retreat to from time to time wish you could go there with me. lovely write (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,655 Points Lyn Paul (6/6/2013 9:00:00 AM)

    Love your heart is this.... Dee If only so many could skip the misery. Great write, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 781 Points Thomas A Robinson (6/6/2013 4:48:00 AM)

    I think we all know this place for it lives in a dream within us. Sometimes dreams can be taken
    out and played with before we have to put them away. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,963 Points Valerie Dohren (6/3/2013 1:14:00 PM)

    Beautiful Dee, and all in five minutes - you are so clever. We all need a special place within us, where we can withdraw and contemplate all the beauties of life and nature. Great stuff. And thank you for your recent comments Dee, very much appreciated. xx (Report) Reply

Read all 9 comments »

Trending Poets

Trending Poems

  1. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  2. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  3. I Heard the Bells on Christmas Day, Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
  4. Christmas Bells, Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
  5. Merry Christmas My Love, Michael P. McParland
  6. A Child's Christmas in Wales, Dylan Thomas
  7. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  8. All the World's a Stage, William Shakespeare
  9. Alone With Everybody, Charles Bukowski
  10. A Poison Tree, William Blake

Poem of the Day

poet Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

I heard the bells on Christmas day
Their old familiar carols play,
And wild and sweet the words repeat
Of peace on earth, good will to men.

...... Read complete »

   

New Poems

  1. I Hope In Some Way, Michael P. McParland
  2. Emerald, Naveed Khalid
  3. I Hope, Michael P. McParland
  4. In All Things, Edward Kofi Louis
  5. See, seed!, Edward Kofi Louis
  6. Rosy (Two), Asit Kumar Sanyal
  7. I Met Him, Edward Kofi Louis
  8. 2 Days After, Edward Kofi Louis
  9. I Did As I Was Commanded, Edward Kofi Louis
  10. Disease, decease!, Edward Kofi Louis
[Hata Bildir]