A Plea To The Invisible Ombudsman Poem by nimal dunuhinga

A Plea To The Invisible Ombudsman

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In this sweatshop our tears are not valued
As it's not shinning well.
Though it tastes salty,
Not exactly salt.
So it's going for a song.
Moth always flies to the flame
And burns it seems.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Jani 19 May 2014

Nice nice! ! I like this poem

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Jerry Hughes 03 December 2008

...................deep philosophy well written good friend, well done. Warmly, Jerry

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Sandra Fowler 03 December 2008

Your tears are noted and recorded somewhere. And certainly your poems are not written in vain.Take heart and keep penning. Poignant work. Always your friend, Sandra

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nimal dunuhinga

nimal dunuhinga

kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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