abhimanyu kumar.s

Rookie - 101 Points (31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

A Pleasant Day - Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

Everything is laughing singing,
All the pretty flowers are sprung.
See the campus in your fun,
With your knowledge in the blank sun.
You and I may sport and play,
For it is a pleasant Day.

Bring the hoop and bring the ball,
Come with happy faces all.
Let us make a merry ring,
Talk and laugh and dance and sing.
Quickly, quickly come away,
For it is a pleasant Day.

Comments about A Pleasant Day by abhimanyu kumar.s

  • Rookie Kushi Kush (10/29/2013 3:05:00 AM)

    Everything is laughing singing, Wat is that everything refers to Mr.abhimanyu kumar.s can u brief it (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Josephine Lauderrdale (6/15/2012 4:55:00 AM)

    I find myself in some of your work and I hope you will take time to read some of mine. I am new to this sight and have as yet only put in about 30 or so poems but I have over 100 I would like to continue reading yours and hopefully get feedback from you on mine and I will do the same for you. Blessings (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mark Holden (12/31/2011 11:27:00 PM)

    enjoyed a lot in this day which is sweet, hope. laugh. dance, and all bright (Report) Reply

  • Rookie grame peele (11/3/2011 4:38:00 AM)

    this poem is very pure and sweet. nice way of presenting such day.10+10+10+10+10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie lover of poetry sweet (9/2/2011 8:45:00 AM)

    lovely piece of art. love to see your poems (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 46 Points David Joel Rodriguez (8/20/2011 4:16:00 AM)

    A pleasant poem for a pleasant day.

    Good work!

    David (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 387 Points Maria C. Pires Costa (8/19/2011 8:16:00 PM)

    I've enjoyed this short thread because it conveys a joyful, positive mood, which is a desirable way to start our day...
    One feels like being part of that 'merry ring'.
    Thanks for your invitation! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Meitha Soekotjo (8/12/2011 1:19:00 AM)

    light beautiful poem, nice! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Geet Asher (7/19/2011 5:08:00 AM)

    nice poem keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Esther Ayala (7/18/2011 7:34:00 PM)

    First thank you for sending me a request. This is a great poem, I will rate it a 10. Hope you don't mind I added it to my poem list. keep up the good work in writing poems like this one. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Adam Omar (7/13/2011 4:21:00 AM)

    very simple rhyme & easy. Has the effect of reaching a lot of people who r able to understand it. It's merry! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,126 Points Hans Vr (6/29/2011 10:33:00 AM)

    I think that reading this poem aloud is a fantastic way to start a new day. Very well written. Optimism is a far better choice than pessimism. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Hilton Ball (6/29/2011 9:24:00 AM)

    nicely done and nice use of ryme i loved to ryme its just what i do (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tanvi Damle (3/18/2011 5:27:00 AM)

    itz a nice poem written in a gr8 way :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jenny Gordon (3/8/2011 10:45:00 PM)

    Very nicely rhymed, and flowing with a fairly good rythm too. It is a sweet poem with the descriptions that depict the pleasantness of the day. I quite enjoyed it. Beautiful. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 11, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, September 2, 2011

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