A Poem Poem by Alfred Britt

A Poem

Rating: 5.0


A Poem

A poem of the day you went away,

A poem of tomorrow filled with sorrow.

A poem of life filled with strife,

A poem of heartache that I am told is fate.

A poem that was not to be because the above fills my eternity of what’s not to be.


Alfred Britt
Copyright 2008

Wednesday, August 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: grief ,life and death,love and loss
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this after the death of the love of my life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 13 August 2015

A well articulated and nicely encapsulated piece of poetry, insightfully penned with conviction. Lovely poem written with spiritual understanding. I quite believe that determined forces of the mind can be brought to bear on forces of fate. A good piece indeed. Thanks for sharing Alfred. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

1 0 Reply
Kelly Kurt 06 August 2015

A haunting poem, Alfred

0 0 Reply
Mike Moon 06 August 2015

Very nicely done. This is from his heart.

1 0 Reply
Akhtar Jawad 05 August 2015

A thoughtful poem..................................

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
1 / 1
Alfred Britt

Alfred Britt

Atlanta
Close
Error Success