Post more comments
Want a gift card for being active Forum member? Post comments and win $25 gift card every week.
Rules:
PoemHunter.com will be giving away Amazon.com gift cards (worth $75 in total) every week to first three members ($25 each) who participate most in our forum discussions. You just have to post comments on forum pages, poet pages or poem pages anywhere inside PoemHunter.com
Comments posted needs to be in different pages. Posting more than 1 comment on the same page will only be counted once.
Members can not post comments without being logged in.
PoemHunter.com has the right to cancel or edit this contest.
PoemHunter.com has a right to disqualify or ban member(s) without providing any type of reason, belief or proof in regards to any type of illegal activity or fraud.

Bri Edwards


A Poem For My Friend Angel.....'bout Birds....[Nature observations; Personal]


I enjoy seeing birds at our backyard feeder,
And, from bushes and trees, hearing some birds that 'tweeeeeter'.

Tiny black seeds attract finches, which have the name ‘gold'....
Who flee from grey juncos which are larger and bold.

Flitting chickadees and 'tufted' titmice, from feeder, eat seed,
While, on the ground, sparrows, towhees, and doves often feed.
They scatter when a blue and white scrub jay flies by,
Or when, overhead, a prowling hawk they do spy.

Waxwings and robins come to pick some nearby berries.
'sorry birdies, ....we have neither grapes nor red cherries.'

Ravens, vultures, and gulls pass high in the air, while
Bushtits and 'hummers' come closer to my chair.

I don't see all these birds every week, but.....i've seen more,
And some non-feathered friends pause, not far from our door.
And when around me i see no animal creatures.....
I enjoy all the plants....that our landscape features.

Submitted: Tuesday, November 13, 2012
Edited: Saturday, December 01, 2012

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poet's Notes about The Poem

angel is a guy friend of mine. i revised this poem in 2012. i DO enjoy seeing the birdies.

-


(April 2009)

Comments about this poem (A Poem For My Friend Angel.....'bout Birds....[Nature observations; Personal] by Bri Edwards )

Enter the verification code :

  • Dinesh Nair (9/19/2013 3:52:00 AM)

    An eye that likes to see all will certainly see such birds too. A fine tribute to your pal Angel. (Report) Reply

  • King Big Head (11/14/2012 2:26:00 PM)

    A good attempt, keep it up. Birds come in my palace
    garden not to eat but just to take a look at me.
    I'm so fantastic even animals love me and want
    to be me.

    Your King. (Report) Reply

Read all 3 comments »

Top Poems

  1. Phenomenal Woman
    Maya Angelou
  2. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  3. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  4. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  5. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  6. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  7. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  8. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
    Maya Angelou
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  10. Invictus
    William Ernest Henley

New Poems

  1. 'Oh, Heart''Oh, Heart'..., Arafat Driche
  2. HearT! ? ...., Arafat Driche
  3. The Art of Praying, Dr John Celes
  4. Auto-Abuse, No Charge, not $7.11 @ 7-11 .., LUVinThe NOW
  5. we won't even have the circus, Mandolyn Davidson
  6. doing donuts in the mojave desert, Mandolyn Davidson
  7. 'Thank You Trees', Christina Sunrise
  8. gurudarsanam-indian thought, dr.k.g.balakrishnan kandangath
  9. Ok so my my girlfiend is a nymphpomaniac, cristobal Benjumea
  10. Your Shot, Your Time, Maverick Jones

Poem of the Day

poet Ambrose Bierce

Weather
by Ambrose Bierce

Once I dipt into the future far as human eye could see,
And I saw the Chief Forecaster, dead as any one can be--
Dead and damned and shut in Hades as a liar from his birth,
...... Read complete »

   

Member Poem

911
by Albert Ahearn

[Hata Bildir]