A Poem Of Once Upon A Time... Poem by indira babbellapati

A Poem Of Once Upon A Time...

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Once upon a time
From the ashes
I was made to come alive

From the breathing ashes
Was I condemned
Back to dead ashes

Now I know
Why all stories begin
With 'once upon a time! '

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Once upon a time
You made me
Come alive
But then,
As if the creator has right
Over his creation
You sent me back to death
Now,
Am I alive
Or am I dead?

I'm neither!

25 Aug 2011
14.19hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 12 May 2013

nice poem, i love it...

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Allemagne Roßmann 29 August 2011

Paralysis of life..half dead and half living....sometimes physical and some other times mental..it comes to check the defensive abilities of people creating losses in years, delaying things, creating disputes over trifles, blocking nerves everything standstill.Lord Saturns atomic bomb says astrologers.You say God is a dodger and God say Ah! you are in drudgery enough to say..have patience lest you become a patient A well drafted poem with the catharsis of human mind and its reflections on life`s upd and downs

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indira babbellapati

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visakhapatnam, india
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