A Poem On Love Poem Poem by Sanjukta Nag

A Poem On Love Poem

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Writing a love poem is so easy
When you are swimming in love with someone.
Just compose some maudlin lines
On the eternal ‘Romeo-Juliet’ ideas of romanticism.
Sprinkle silvery stardust and soft moonbeams,
So that your lover’s face can glow
More and more bright than any astral light.
And conclude your journey by lying with him
On the bed of thornless roses
While heads sharing the same pillow,
Hearts reflecting the same domestic dream.

But writing a love poem seems to be most painful
When you have drifted apart from your loved one,
Like a lost ship floats hopelessly under foggy clouds,
In the middle of the Bermuda triangle.
Each emotion you try to scribble
On the red-turned-black paper of love,
Instantly brings thousand years of rain in your eyes.
The sun becomes inadequate to warm your cold skeleton,
The moon appears like a confused silly satellite
That keeps changing its avatar every single night.
And you pretend to be in love,
Only to be the most fortunate lover in the world of poetry.
It hurts,
It hurts to consider that
For whom you are putting those words one by one,
Clothing them beautifully with praised rhetoric,
Is never going to read that
Or look back at you in his farthest oblivion.
Because he doesn’t know,
You still sleep each night on the lap of darkness
Remembering his playful smiles,
And wake up screaming his name from a nightmare.
He doesn’t want to know,
You are still writing something about him,
That is supposed to be known as a love poem.

Thursday, September 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,relationship,heartbreak,love,poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 10 March 2017

Focussed and factual. Deep feelings elegantly expressed in a well texted and nicely composed poem. Thanks for sharing Sanjukta.

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Vishal Sharma 19 October 2015

you are correct you know i have composed atmost 1000 poems over my ex...!!

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M Asim Nehal 04 September 2015

Written with true feelings...........I liked it. to sum up this poem in one word SUBLIME.....10

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Rajnish Manga 03 September 2015

Writing a love poem can be easy as well as painful based on the two contrasting situations- first one is the union of hearts and the other one is due to break-up in love life which Instantly brings thousand years of rain in your eyes. Beautiful commentary on man-woman relationships. Thanks.

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