Shalom Freedman

Gold Star - 4,892 Points (Troy New York)

A Poem On The Last Day Of The Year - Poem by Shalom Freedman


All the words are gone now-
I am left alone
With the quiet-
The quiet is good now-
and I am not tired-

What will be next year-
I cannot know.
All my life is
God's to know-
But I cannot know.

Comments about A Poem On The Last Day Of The Year by Shalom Freedman

  • Rookie Rinzu Susan Rajan (10/7/2008 3:22:00 AM)

    wow... the mystery that teh new year brings with it...
    u have captured it wonderfully...

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  • Freshman - 947 Points Ency Bearis (10/3/2008 1:48:00 AM)

    an inquisitive verses about the future..nice write/ending couplet rhyme...great

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 3, 2008

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