A Poem Written In A Brothel Poem by nimal dunuhinga

A Poem Written In A Brothel

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Those who go in the heavy rains
some do have umbrellas
but some they don't have
and both of them got soaked.
If you want to get wet
not necessary to go outside.
You find rain indoors too.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
joey oo 30 September 2006

Mmmmm - one of those poems that the more you look at it, the more you see - well done...got me thinking... Take care.Joey

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Duncan Wyllie 16 September 2006

Ah yes this is very well put, so profound, Love duncan X

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Sandra Fowler 14 September 2006

What a sad poem! Lots of atmosphere in this one, Nimal. Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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