A Pointless Poem Poem by Ben Coomer

A Pointless Poem

Rating: 4.5


all we see is a corrupt and evil world
all we see is our inner battles
our fights that we win
and the ones we lose
we know of our own struggles
but imagine watching someone you care about
going through the exact same thing
sad right?
you would go through unimaginable pain to help this friend
but you cant
how would you feel
sad right?
now you know how angels feel

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amrit Rathi 22 May 2010

A very brief but delivers with a bang the sad message[now you know how angels feel ]Great and powerful write.I gave 9/10. Thanks

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