A Poor Christmas Gift For Her Poem by nimal dunuhinga

A Poor Christmas Gift For Her

Rating: 5.0


She's uneasy and unwrapped.
A feather like Handkerchief
Woven by threads of love.
And she found the colorless stain on it
In the shape of a tiny heart
Like a Watermark in life.

* To my beloved spouse

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 30 July 2010

This is not a poor christmas for her, no it is not...i hope she know this gift is a symbol of care, embroidery with sincerity and with invisible of love decor...if i was her i will love this gift, it mean when i sad, i need this handkerchief to wipe my tears, feel like someone send care by giving this...and every little gift is a symbol of love, no matter how much it is the important thing somebody put us in a infinite value..like this one, make me smile :)

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Sandra Fowler 21 December 2009

What a fragile, lovely gift.An old saying comes to mind, 'Love is not love till you give it away'.10/10. Warmly, Sandra

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Romeo Della Valle 20 December 2009

Brother, this is a pure manifestation of love for someone so special, great job, you got my vote 10+++(if you don't see my rating is because I have been problems with my page...I Just posted one titled 'MY DAILY ROUTINE IN NEW YORK' hope you like it, Peace and Love

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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