A Prayer Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Prayer

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Prayer
Real conveyer
Of inner messenger

Without any fear
In ears
Hear


Call
Prevent fall
Help us all


Know nothing really
Of folly
Sadly


Fly
Earnestly try
I close eyes

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 September 2012

Sad Rose Marquez8 hours ago Very nice but could use more work Comment 1 Comment+1 Confused

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 September 2012

Susan Graveline8 hours ago Not grasping the intent. Comment 1 Comment+1 this poem deals with the strength of a prayer and how it helps us toshare our inner thoughts

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 September 2012

Rollie Mukherjee8 hours ago this poem is sharing the common belief about the strength of a prayer and its power of healing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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