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Peter Vealey

Rookie - 23 Points (16th March 1952. / Hertfordshire)

A precise art?

That place we were.
How right it seemed then.
The look, the feel of each other.
A precise art?
Flawed by time.
So now sadly out of
Rhyme and communication.
Memories captured
Somewhere in time.
A hidden pain, an unrecognised crime
Of betrayal.
Who's to blame?
This precise art of lovin'
Is never known.
Two minds in synchronicity,
Or in different worlds of relativity?
The ongoing reality of life.
What was that?
Oh just a scientist's thesis on relationships.
A precise art or another fools'
Falling love dart.

Submitted: Thursday, November 29, 2007
Edited: Wednesday, April 27, 2011

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  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (6/16/2008 12:37:00 PM)

    I gave this a 9 because it is both creative and extremely well written. This
    writer is among the best I have read here. This piece is quite unique because
    it is not creative just to be so. It is genuine in origin. It comes directly from
    his mind without searching.Fabulous!

    GW62 (Report) Reply

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