Celine Berghmans (August 21 1990 / Belgium)

Very sad poem but again, nicely written. I enjoy your dark poems Celine. You express yourself well.
Mark

Lots of startling imagery here. You paint a picture of darkness and loss of hope. Excellent work though, but I feel you need a Valentine Poem. Karin Anderson

sad but powerful.....you wrote this one passionately....I liked it.

dark poem, well done................open the lock

Celine...
I read this through several times, each time slower than the first. I feel a tempo to this that tells me that this was as much released from the spirit as it was written by the hand. A lot of angst that poured out and perhaps, there remains much more that needs to be exorcised..There is a strong impression of the biographical mixed with the observational in this piece. Very well written in a way that gives the discerning spirit a little peek into your heart.
Kev.

Seems to be trapped in narrow passages of the life..... Another good one Celine..... keep it up.....10.

Your expression in this write gives the feeling of be trapped, well done.

Scott

This description was so vivid that it was as if the prison of the mind was a place you have been. Perish the thought.

GW62