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Mark Slaughter
(3/4/2009 10:00:00 AM) |
Very sad poem but again, nicely written. I enjoy your dark poems Celine. You express yourself well.
Mark
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Karin Anderson
(2/11/2009 12:17:00 AM) |
Lots of startling imagery here. You paint a picture of darkness and loss of hope. Excellent work though, but I feel you need a Valentine Poem. Karin Anderson
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Vaibhav Pandey
(2/3/2009 7:37:00 AM) |
sad but powerful.....you wrote this one passionately....I liked it.
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Kevin Wells
(1/29/2009 2:58:00 PM) |
Celine...
I read this through several times, each time slower than the first. I feel a tempo to this that tells me that this was as much released from the spirit as it was written by the hand. A lot of angst that poured out and perhaps, there remains much more that needs to be exorcised..There is a strong impression of the biographical mixed with the observational in this piece. Very well written in a way that gives the discerning spirit a little peek into your heart.
Kev.
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir
(1/29/2009 11:49:00 AM) |
Seems to be trapped in narrow passages of the life..... Another good one Celine..... keep it up.....10.
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Scott Austin
(1/29/2009 2:02:00 AM) |
Your expression in this write gives the feeling of be trapped, well done.
Scott
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Yoonoos Peerbocus
(1/28/2009 12:47:00 PM) |
lovely analysis of inner being housed within the walls of human nature/ eyes sense heavy well done
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Greenwolfe 1962
(1/28/2009 11:41:00 AM) |
This description was so vivid that it was as if the prison of the mind was a place you have been. Perish the thought.
GW62
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