A Promise Poem by Hans Preciado

A Promise



Remember that first day you told someone you would?
That fake Promise?
Or just another 'To Do'

Make this of no error, for we, not I,
Are to make that difference, to change
Not to make,
For we too must know that
Change is not complete once we create the change,
But how can he who creates a change
Can do this if no one can create but only transform?

This leaves us thinking of the obvious...
Are we to change or to transform? ,
Because as it very denotation describes,
It is to something modify permanently, and to deform is not.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 10 April 2008

a promise is not a broken promises...yeah you're absolutely right pal.....keep going bro..........

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Chula Vista, California
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