@a Promise Poem by Jordan Legaspi
@a Promise
A promise
It was summer time we found each other
Our two different stories become one
Then we open the memories of laughter and tears
With the new chapter of our new beginning
And colored its pages with our cares
It looks wonderful and great
But another book has to be faced by us
Though it contains black and white paper
Yet we never will surrender
We have to go and fight for it use
To reach the last pages of our journey
Till to the last days and that is a promise
Note:
City of Mati, Davao Oriental, Philippines.1992 AD
Yet we never will surrender We have to go and fight for it use To reach the last pages of our journey Till to the last days and that is a promise..........YES AND THAT HAS TO BE THE PROMISE TILL THE END OF THE JOURNEY... BEAUTIFULLY INTERWOVEN WITH WORDS.. I LIKED ITS PLACINGS.....10 READ MINE... CLEAR EMOTIONS....AN END TO SOLITUDE
Good. But revise to correct grammatical errors.don't be careless. e.g. love is like a poem - IT also has feelings - NOT they lose (love? } is like a poem ... it reveals
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4/19/2024 7:32:10 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Both sides of life will come…life is but mixed bag of drama… Light and shade are there…erect head with positiveness take up the challenge …then both the books will be well read…indeed a good poem… 10 Ms Nivedita UK