A Promise Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Heartfelt poem, very touchy.....10+++++

Sorrow of separation from mind is well expressed and this is definitely a very beautiful poem shared here that turns mind to write more. Very fantastic sharing.10

I am only for you and you are mine! - nice line expressing the essence of love, the poem has a sad tone but at the same time it has a message which is very positive, well written, thanks for sharing.

A sad but beautiful poem. Those who are walking their last steps could feel the love and promise of companionship that in near end.

Very encouraging, although it's sad too!

but the eyes with a red and wink lining! ...............i KNOW eyes often blink and sometimes they wink, ....... .............................................................but do they ever pink? perhaps you meant pink lining? ? what are you hiding are these your tears? .....................DO YOU want to capitalize what. it is the start of ............................................a new sentence i believe. ================= i don't understand the use of creeper, but perhaps it refers to a grape vine somehow. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - CREEPER: creeper play noun creep·er \ˈkrē-pər Definition of creeper 1 : one that creeps: such as a: a creeping plant b: a bird (as of the family Certhiidae) that creeps about on trees or bushes searching for insects c: a creeping insect or reptile 2 : any of various devices used for creeping: such as a: a fixture with iron points worn on the shoe to prevent slipping b: a low wheeled platform for supporting the body when working under an automobile 3 : a usually one-piece garment for a child at the crawling age AND: creeper play noun creep·er \ˈkrē-pərDefinition of creeper for Students 1 : a person or animal that moves slowly, timidly, or quietly 2 : a small bird that creeps about trees and bushes in search of insects 3 : a plant (as ivy) that grows by spreading over a surface =================================== eyes ready to snap for the heart your pose, ........I THINK you are saying that the eyes (and brain) will snap/take a 'photo' of the person's pose, to be remembered. i like this! favorite line: Turn, let me write a promise on your lips, ...............using pen or pencil? I JUST NOTICED THE LAST LINE! it is very 'telling'. (Promise of a dying spouse) ...............thanks for helping me to understand the new world. bri :) to MyPoemList. and i'll put it into the April 2017's showcase, as is, BUT PLEASE let me know if i should change wink to pink. OKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK? BRI :) Thanks.

I am only for you and you are mine! ......... This great avowal of love is enough to drown all miseries and doubts and turn tears of sorrow into tears of joy. A very touching write!

A touching poem................................................

I can imagine I just posted a similar one of mine but kisses i couldn't refine your poetry touches the heart Akhtar j

A lovely and sad poem, Akhtar. Thanks for sharing