A Promise Poem by Sans Serif

A Promise

Rating: 3.5


A breeze in the sun
A moment of fun
And suddenly
There you are.
Caught in my mind
Seet and kind
My bright and
Shining Star.
A light in the sky
That is the eye
Of what is in
My head.
Pictures of you
Won't help me to do
What I want
Instead.
I will wait for eternity
And hope we find a way
To come together and meet
O what a glorious day.
To hug one another
And put our hands around our hips
And finally in our climatic meet
Feel each others lips.
I will wait endlessly
I love you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonia Hernandez 01 October 2009

really wonderful! i showed my brother this and he loved it!

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Gwendalynn Ash 29 September 2009

a similar promise ihav made...and i know how hard itll be waiting for that day

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Allenika ... 01 September 2009

O' memories... many promises were broken in our past lives.. its rare when one keeps it. nice job!

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Dani Moore 01 September 2009

a promise is ment to b keept forevr so dont forget great pom keep on writing

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 September 2009

Promise is meant to be broken.So, keep your promise in hand Matt.You can never know one day you'd break your promise, that's the day you'd remember regret is here to stay.

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