Rambling Dreamer


A Promise - Poem by Rambling Dreamer

When you're stuck on the lonely dark road and no one in view,
Just always remember that i'm the light eagerly waiting to be found by you.
And after all that we have been through,
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another old poem from the old account :)

Comments about A Promise by Rambling Dreamer

  • Rookie - 0 Points Aswath Raman (8/23/2013 9:14:00 AM)

    This is a nice romantic poem Nikita! A powerful flow of passion. But I feel you need to reframw the middle four lines. (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,423 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (8/23/2013 6:27:00 AM)

    A wistful poem with lovely super rhymin!
    Pls do read my horses poem. Tnx (Report) Reply








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