David McLansky

Veteran Poet - 1,194 Points (5/24/1944 / New York City)

A Proposal To Valerie Dohren - Poem by David McLansky

Would you mind
If I made love to you
My wife is still asleep
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Comments about A Proposal To Valerie Dohren by David McLansky

  • Freshman - 511 Points Elaine Sept (12/10/2013 3:58:00 AM)

    You are a master at this art
    And that reveals the love of heart.
    Wonderfully done! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 4,731 Points Valerie Dohren (8/18/2013 9:29:00 AM)

    Never gone in for Internet dating
    Seems a funny sort of mating
    I like someone I can hug and hold
    If I may be ever so bold
    So to your wife you must be true
    But hope my words will satisfy you (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,825 Points Anthony Di''anno (8/18/2013 7:47:00 AM)

    A wonderful thought and very well penned David. I await Val's response :) (Report) Reply

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