A Puppet's Cry Poem by Jon Lloyd

Lovely thought, and great parallel with human being used like a puppet. greta stuff there Jon. Regards, Lucy

A lovely conceit with a touch of sadness.

I thought that this poem was really good and you are really touching to poeple in your poetry. I think that you are really talented in what you do and continue to write poetry. Well keep writing hpefully get to talk to you some time.

so nice! ! so true! ! ! sometimes I feel like that and i wonder who is taking control of my strings and I blame myself for letting them control my life! !

kudos to u my man.... it got me thinking and my brain is as dead as a door knob Adryan

A wonderful, use of imagery, This poem gives us a sense of feeling that we are all puppets being controlled by a higher power, whether it be god, the government or even our loved ones... Well done...A deff 10 from me Sincerely Nickie x x

lol.. u spack! ! lol.. its quite good... and very thought provocing actually lol..

This gives one that dangling feeling, picked up and put down at will, a super write. Congrats. Love Ernestine