A Queen Behind Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

A Queen Behind



From dawn to dusk, pursuing hot
my righteous crooked ways
divine bewitching in her smile
urging to go outright,
trespassing on my likes, dislikes
in deeds my wrong and right,
in shadows mine in sleep and dreams
throwing alluring baits,
Queen real of an unreal world-
she oars my swaying sail
on waters, deep or shallow, mine
illusive she- on trail

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Wednesday, October 1, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: illusion,real life,journey
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dhanesh Aradhye 16 October 2008

amazing.. simply amazing lines... :)

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Sumita Datta 16 October 2008

Very clear and complete imagination.... It's truly a nice piece of thought...

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Nandhini .... 17 October 2008

Very mistic your Queen is. So capturing & dramatic. Many to loose their sanity Looking for her in light......

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Naidz Ladia 09 January 2009

QUEEN IN HER HIGHNESS..nd UR THE KING IN UR KINGDOM...SHE S THE REAL QUEEN N UR REAL WRLD...WHAT A NICE PIECE DEAR KESAV..

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 21 January 2009

MAYA brought out there very poetically..and we dance to her tunes...10

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Narayanan Ramakrishnan 24 February 2011

beauty and poetry abound and profound, provides a very nice read. great

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 June 2010

‘On waters deep or shallow mine /Illusive she on trail...noetic oscillations…swings…to and fro… rich concept…Sir… Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 hf

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 30 January 2010

of course, this one is poetic

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Nalini Hebbar 21 September 2009

very poetic and full of wonderful images...regards

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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

Righteous crooked ways, Divine bewitching is her smile Rachel Ann Butler

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