A Question Never Answered Poem by Jennifer K

I agree with Adam, use shorter lines, and there is always an answer to every question. Might not be the answer you are looking for. Well done.

hi jennifer k... The first part of point of days to burning eyes, has a eye minded catch, with thought into it as a beautiful flow. After that.. well. There can be many version of your thought. This is mind. After burning eyes? .......... I've been before here, broken on the floor. Begging for this to be the last time. If I were a shadow, i'd feel no bruise. If absolutely nothing to you, in me, mean nothing? I could and will, close my eyes until my day ends. Like I said before... it has to have a flow as a song within.

very well done. it seems like you understand some need to know things about life. for the poem id reccomend breaking it up a little more to keep the lines shorter. ill read some more in a bit :)