A Quick Stop At My Grave! Poem by Poetheart Morgan

A Quick Stop At My Grave!

Rating: 5.0


in my eternal search
white face and deep eyes
but with inspirations ~ highs ~

I rest.....

stop the noise!
Hey, i am crumbling here!

the voices so loud
the walk of passers by

this shock me, hurts me
I can feel it in my guts

? ? ? ? ? ?
what guts?

i was a poet you know
but they put me there
in grounded

now i am just a skeleton
thin and perverse

until i get the most beautiful words
and put them in a new poem

but how?

stop the noise!
Hey, i am crumbling here


but damn, has no more respect! ! ! !


they remain talking
upon my grave
in My Graveyard!

Yes, i am a deadly soul!
ha, ha, ha
no one expected for that einh?

with vaporous torn dress
dancing around others graves
waiting for a word
to break up the enchantment

cursed by poor stanzas
that i heard and in a hidden place
i held it

So behold! ! ! ! !

i am angry again
and for a word i am searching for

just stop by my grave
no noises no scandals
just be brave
and one word
you must to say

thanks!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
to better illustrate! ! ! !
http: //mirnamorgan62.wordpress.com/2013/11/30/a-quick-stop-at-my-grave/
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 30 November 2013

Hey, i am crumbling here! , , , , i loved this line (twice) ? ? ? ? ? ? what guts? ....this made me laugh, but i did NOT 'laugh MY guts out'; i think i heard some expression like that [laugh....guts out] when i was a kid. in grounded ...... how about grounded or in (the) ground? just some thoughts. :) i've never met a perverse skeleton i didn't like! i gave up trying to find a (free and easy-to-find) translation of einh. german. i heard a lot of germans went to brazil after or during ww2. i really like this story of a frustrated (and maybe-insomniac) dead poet. i think i saw a movie once/not twice entitled Dead Poets Society. shall i send an application to you? thanks Poetheart in earth again [your name REALLY fits here] for sharing. bri :)

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Poetheart Morgan 30 November 2013

I sent to you a message so now allow me to laugh a lot! ! ! ! KAKAKAKAKAKAKAKAKA And thank Poet yours comments are always welcome! ! ! Laughing again! ! ! !

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Robert Green 02 December 2013

Thanks.....................................................................................

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Suman Kumar Das 07 December 2013

Yes, i am a deadly soul! ha, ha, ha no one expected for that einh? ............. makes me spell-bound...................loved it

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Guy Dimitri Jagodinski 09 December 2013

Wonderful poem. Really enjoyed reading this. I like the action in the verses.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 08 May 2014

I like it! A whole world of imagery filled with multi-dimensional thoughts.

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Anthony Burkett 30 January 2014

Is it a muse? One strong enough to awaken your soul and bring you forth from the grave of the lost for words. Your pen is beautiful in its soul cry of remorse and pain.

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Shahzia Batool 13 January 2014

this poem looks as a product of a specific phase or mood...but very expressive..!

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Kanav Justa 14 December 2013

an interesting write., , liked it

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 10 December 2013

it feels me as if the poet moves through death.... after death and returns to earth again. unique writing style... liked it very much...

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