A Relationship, Of Sorts Poem by Chuck Audette

I've only recently caught sight of your work. I wish it had been earlier. This is a brilliantly crafted piece with elements of truth just thrown in as if in jest... very finely crafted.

Oh yeah it's like your telling your self the result of what you might reject or accept.. Nice way of putting it!

your poems are simply beautifully truthful...nalini

I love this, Chuck! You could have written a mountain of words and not said as much! That old devil called 'commitment' eh :) Love has flown in and out of my window many times...now I begin to wonder if I've seen the last flight...ah well :) Great stuff :) Jack.

profundity! ! i cant 'do' profound. (envy)

Love, a never ending subject, fascinating but painful. Ruthie

Hi Chuck Another 10 for a first class rhyming miniature. Great balance and rythmn in here. All have a moral or point, no matter how short Great Steve

I love this Chuck, it is so clever in its brevity. HG: -) xx

Though brief, this is a witty and clever poem, Chuck. I particularly liked how you made each terse word count, yet made them produce just the right bit of imagery to make this poem very effective. Carl.

This has the brilliance of a Leunig cartoon. What more can I say? love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥