Drinking Friday night spirit myth,
Dreaming of poetic youth,
Where you can dance with magical breath,
Cherish every moment that follows next,
Musical escapades in the moonlight,
Burning the midnight oil,
Joyous sleeplessness,
We embrace the imagination,
We live in fluid fantasies of happiness.
You have my phone number now,
I’ll obtain yours at least by the next lifetime,
Nikki, we may be lovers yet!
Keep trying you'll get her...whether in this lifetime or the next you'll get her. Good poem!
well, hopefully she'll return your long distant phone call from the heart...a good read my friend.
I liked this one. I love the change in tone in the second stanza....The first stanza brought out a bunch of great images. Great writing!
Hey, read to that girl this and the last poem I commented on, and she's yours lol ~Lee
What is more sacred than desire? This is just so fine - truly admirable. I especially admired the 'breath' and the breadth of feeling. A very eloquent and evocative write.
Hope she phoned - how could she not after reading a joy like this? ! Hugs Anna xxx
Wonderful write, such a closeness for another.You have written this very well.Love Duncan
Brilliant! I thought the ending made it kind of funny, too. Well done.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
persuaverance is always useful too. especially if one believes in reincarnation. the only trouble is, Uriah, is what happens if Nikki changes her phone number in the next lifetime? anyhow...another warm, unpretentious offering...and Nikki, if you're reading this, cut the guy a break! He cares enough to write poetry about you...that's a good start : -)