A Sad Farewell Poem by lalitha iyer

A Sad Farewell



At her prime
the busty Goody
bid bye
to life around
the urge to live
is burning hot
yet the flames
blown out
canker in the bud
cancer to dread
God loves those
Who die young, though.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 04 May 2010

the urge to live is burning hot yet the flames blown out sadness pictured well for a death immature.... all ur poems are lovely laltha.

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Rakesh Bedi 28 July 2009

God loves those/ who die young....; very impressive and expressive lines!

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Naidz Ladia 06 July 2009

nicely penned..nice to read...too young to die means less guilts and sins..naizz

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Ravi Chandran 04 April 2009

God loves those Who die young, though. sometimes dying is better than walking dead.... not a word to express the feel brought by your poem! ! ! ! ! marvelous....... mind blowing....... words of heaven!

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