A Sad Moment Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

A Sad Moment



Awake in the morning, a chilled morning;
Cold breeze sneaking through the window,
Things looked gloomy and not pleasing,
A little bird at the window fluttering and chirping,
A sad note in his voice.......singing,
On grass, morning tears not glistening,
The reason, perhaps, is the warmth of sun missing,
And my cup of tea looking cold and empty,
And when filled with warmth
Still going cold and empty,
For how long will clouds
Keep the sun hiding in far heaven?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A poem on morning clumsiness.........when sun seen missing above.....
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Painted with the ink of creativity.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 18 January 2014

Many many thanks............Dinesh Ji................I am humbled....................

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Dinesan Madathil 17 January 2014

It is a sad poem on the assumed proportions of the clumsiness of a morning. But it is very nice to see that you have a high degree of rendering style and it is a beautiful poem indeed Deepakji.

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