A Sad Story Poem by Kelly Batson

A Sad Story

Rating: 4.3


Can’t count on anyone this time
Trading faith for piece of mind
Seems your always needing time to heal
Scared of moments when you begin to feel
Just set them free and walk away
It will only lead to heartache anyway

It’s easier to walk blind and let feeling go
Then believe in chance maybe take a blow
But think back of what you let pass
And all that you might have made last
What feelings and emotions
What moments and additions
The sun was shinning till you lost control
Such a sad life for an untrusting lonely soul

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynn Glover 25 May 2010

A beautiful poem written with lots of emotions and plenty of rhyming, which I really love. A good Write. Keep up the good work. Lynn

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Sam Edison 19 July 2009

It can be very hard to trust in others after certain life experiences but we deffinitely cannot live our lives not trusting anyone or we end up forever lonely. Good write 10/10

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