BEAU GOLDEN

Rookie (1565 / Earth, USA, California, Los Angeles, Van Nuys, Balboa blvd)

A Sandcastle Waits For Your Return - Poem by BEAU GOLDEN

I'm touching you in my minds eye now I don't really know
Where my next few words will go
I just don't know what else to say
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Comments about A Sandcastle Waits For Your Return by BEAU GOLDEN

  • Rookie - 0 Points Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele (11/24/2008 6:48:00 PM)

    Beau - The nice thing about sand castles is that they can be rebuilt over and over again.

    Lovely poem!

    Best wishes - Cheryl (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Lime and Tequila with a Splash of Pineapple (2/8/2008 6:28:00 AM)

    I realize this poem is sad. But for me, it also raised such memories of days spent on the beaches as a teen with my date, playing in th sand, wrapped underneath a blanket, getting wet. That young relationship has blown away in the sand, but the memories remain. This was a lovely write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ruby Root (7/9/2006 8:50:00 AM)

    This is a very sad poem Beau, but also very beautiful. Your use of vivid imagery is excellent. You are a talented writer. I enjoyed this poem. Again it is written with compassion. You seem to have lost someone along the way. That is the impression I get when I read this poem. Take care Excellent Poem! (Report) Reply








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