BEAU GOLDEN

Rookie (1565 / Earth, USA, California, Los Angeles, Van Nuys, Balboa blvd)

A Sandcastle Waits for Your Return


I'm touching you in my minds eye now I don't really know
Where my next few words will go
I just don't know what else to say
........................
........................
read full text »


Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Comments about this poem (A Sandcastle Waits for Your Return by BEAU GOLDEN )

Enter the verification code :

  • Rookie Lime and Tequila with a Splash of Pineapple (2/8/2008 6:28:00 AM)

    I realize this poem is sad. But for me, it also raised such memories of days spent on the beaches as a teen with my date, playing in th sand, wrapped underneath a blanket, getting wet. That young relationship has blown away in the sand, but the memories remain. This was a lovely write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ruby Root (7/9/2006 8:50:00 AM)

    This is a very sad poem Beau, but also very beautiful. Your use of vivid imagery is excellent. You are a talented writer. I enjoyed this poem. Again it is written with compassion. You seem to have lost someone along the way. That is the impression I get when I read this poem. Take care Excellent Poem! (Report) Reply

Trending Poets

Trending Poems

  1. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  2. Fire and Ice, Robert Frost
  3. Alone, Edgar Allan Poe
  4. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening, Robert Frost
  5. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  6. If, Rudyard Kipling
  7. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  8. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings, Maya Angelou
  9. रंजानाय फैगौ, Ronjoy Brahma
  10. Invictus, William Ernest Henley

Poem of the Day

poet Richard Lovelace

Tell me not (Sweet) I am unkind,
That from the nunnery
Of thy chaste breast and quiet mind
To war and arms I fly.

True, a new mistress now I chase,
...... Read complete »

   

New Poems

  1. It, Gilbert Ortega
  2. The Approach, Gilbert Ortega
  3. Mona Lisa Canvas, Gilbert Ortega
  4. Passion Play, Gilbert Ortega
  5. The Gatekeeper part 2 (In memory of Edga.., Gilbert Ortega
  6. AGAINST FORGETTING, George Dee Vuy
  7. The Gatekeeper part 1 (In memory of Edga.., Gilbert Ortega
  8. For Jennifer, Gilbert Ortega
  9. Gilded Thorns, Gilbert Ortega
  10. Journey of death, ramesh rai
[Hata Bildir]