nimal dunuhinga

Rookie - 145 Points (19, April,1951 / kalubovila East, Sri Lanka)

A Scapegoat's White Hope - Poem by nimal dunuhinga

A sunstroke sunflower yawn in the whirlwind
and a scapegoat scamper with his old wheelbarrow
which is full of manure.
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Comments about A Scapegoat's White Hope by nimal dunuhinga

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (9/11/2006 5:30:00 PM)

    This is a charming piece Nimal, written in your inimitable engaging style. I love your 'sunstroke sunflower' and your 'scapegoat scamper' with his wheelbarrow of manure. The images are very unusual and appealing and the structure of the poem excellent. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Duncan Wyllie (9/5/2006 1:11:00 PM)

    A lovely story poem, well done great creative touch
    Love duncan X (Report) Reply

  • Rookie R H (9/5/2006 8:43:00 AM)

    Wonderful observations, vividly portrayed. Nice work Nimal. Justine (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (9/4/2006 2:31:00 PM)

    Very surreal. The poet soldiers on in spite of all the difficulties. Helen Keller said, 'Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. It's what sunflowers do.'
    Take care, Nimal.

    Kind regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie kskdnj sajn (9/4/2006 11:07:00 AM)

    Nimal, a fine write like always... loved the diversity. Thanks, and hope all is well. :)
    xoxo Angie (Report) Reply








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