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A Scared Fairy - Poem by xelam kan

Sweet and melodious as Homeric rhymes,
But had a life of tragedy prime.
Faraway from vanity
She was as sacred as Trinity.

In a harsh countryside
from a barbaric tribe;
She was like a wild rose
Deprived from her repose.

What ail thee O! Fairy Queen?
Such woes and sorrow I had never seen.
Upon my plaintive query
At once her face got scary.

'Since got conscious
Immersed into this life noxious
Never had a second of sweet willing,
Always been threatened of honor-killing.'

'Neither joy nor certitude, I had
but been blessed often with fortune bad'.
In sobs and sigh-many a time
She had versed her past in melancholy rhymes.

Alone and distant as a polar star,
Helpless was I to wage a war,
And her wild wide scary eyes,
Made my dreams full of cries.


Comments about A Scared Fairy by xelam kan

  • Gold Star - 9,642 Points Bri Edwards (6/27/2014 12:24:00 AM)

    my favorite lines, so far:

    Upon my plaintive query
    At once her face got scary.

    and these:

    And her wild wide scary eyes,
    Made my dreams full of cries. ...............nice wide/wide! eyes/cries also are appreciated.

    hey john, i just noticed an old comment, below, by me. and i see you did make changes since last time! AND i see that i still liked 'those' lines i mentioned almost one year ago.. thanks, again, for sharing. :) bri (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (5/2/2014 12:14:00 AM)

    A great imaginative write.........
    A lovely tale of love, beauty, innocence and barbarism................
    Though poem doesn't embody hope, yet it flows beautifully...........
    Some beautiful lines in there/.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,642 Points Bri Edwards (7/11/2013 8:45:00 PM)

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    Far way form vanity...far way (faraway?) FROM? vanity...am i correct, G.j.?

    'Since had conscious...i don't understand why the apostrophe is in front of 'Since.........and do you mean consciousness (since birth) ? of course conscious makes the rhyme; maybe that is why you used it.
    ok....now i see the other apostrophes.....i think they are called apostrophes. so now i think you are paraphrasing the Fairy Queen's answer to you. ok.

    but i REALLY don't believe you want bliss here: .....
    'Neither joy nor certitude I had
    Always bliss with fortune bad.'

    as bliss means, according to the computer, : ....

    bliss
    /blis/
    Noun

    Perfect happiness; great joy.

    Something providing such happiness.

    i especially enjoyed reading the following; .....i mean the poet created some artistic lines to describe a grim situation.

    What ail thee O! Fairy Queen?
    Such woes and sorrow I had never seen,
    Upon my plaintive query
    At once her face got scary.

    AND i especially enjoyed the following lines: ....


    Alone and distant as polar star
    Helpless was I to wage a war,
    Her wild wide scary eyes
    Made my dreams full of cries. a fine poem. thanks for sharing. bri (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Cierrah Smiles (12/1/2012 3:07:00 PM)

    this poem is amazing :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 228 Points John Shea (11/30/2012 8:36:00 PM)

    A sad and and weary way to live even for a fairy..the poem a ten for sure sir. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Scarlett Outlaw (11/27/2012 6:08:00 AM)

    this poem is fantastic! ! :) :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Asif Andalib (11/27/2012 12:55:00 AM)

    Nice poetic work. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,276 Points Shahzia Batool (11/21/2012 12:15:00 PM)

    It's good to create fantasies and fairy-tales in this topsy-turvy world and all chaotic disorders, a temporary though a complete escape... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points Hamid Negah (11/21/2012 6:01:00 AM)

    Beautiful word...nice poem...i enjoyed so much. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 120 Points Persian Khushi (11/19/2012 4:27:00 AM)

    Well done Gulsher, you have scared the fairy even more.: D

    Remarkable poem created thank you for inviting me to read. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,269 Points Unwritten Soul (11/18/2012 10:28:00 AM)

    Perfect content for the title you named, you flow the words in a wave of story in such amazing parallel emotion..i can feel the fears! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,711 Points Valerie Dohren (11/18/2012 4:59:00 AM)

    Some beautiful imagery in here, a very inspired write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Zarina Binda (11/18/2012 4:32:00 AM)

    the emotion in this beauty is just so incredible. especially for me because what is decribed here i can very much relate to. very well done ^_^

    xXx
    zarina (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Caroline Bulleck (11/17/2012 11:40:00 AM)

    I have never heard of a fairy being described as such. I like that you explore different points of view. I give it a rating of 10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 72 Points Akram Saqib (11/17/2012 11:29:00 AM)

    nice words collected in excellent way. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 94 Points Jahan Zeb (11/17/2012 7:57:00 AM)

    Here I am to complete it LOL

    Superbbbbb Gulsher. You really have amazing ability to create poems that feel like the tiny raindrops of the rain in summer, keeps fresh and alive. The rhythm is amazing and the flow is like the flow of the cold fresh stream down the mountain peaks of Kalam

    Fabulous. The similes and metaphors are of high literary standards. Touching

    Alone and distant as polar star (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 264 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (11/17/2012 7:39:00 AM)

    great words and brilliant ideas. i enjoy this fragrant work.
    well done (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,260 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (11/17/2012 7:16:00 AM)

    Ah a fantastic poem but d poignant effect makes one sad. Sir pls do read my poems too. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,075 Points Hazel Durham (11/17/2012 5:25:00 AM)

    A beautiful poignant tale, with great lines! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tanveer Sharma (11/17/2012 2:11:00 AM)

    wonderful composition... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 16, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, March 21, 2014


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