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A Secret

I`ll be aware as I speak
To keep that secret at its peak,
A confidence if I should break
Could just haunt me
Then be a huge mistake,
I`ll keep it locked within my soul
So no-one will ever know,
A secret told would be no more
I may lose a friend
If she closed her door,
'Hush' is the word I must now live by
Or my friend may say 'good-bye'.

Submitted: Monday, June 11, 2012
Edited: Monday, June 11, 2012


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  • Elizabeth Padillo Olesen (12/14/2012 1:14:00 PM)

    Well, this is something many can identify with. Friendship has its own vulnerability and to keep a secret is also something one has the courage to do. Very nice poem, Heather.

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  • Tony Karas (12/11/2012 7:46:00 AM)

    A secret shared is secret no longer. I love Sheldon's attitude about secret keeping keeping on Big Bang Theory. I practically roll on the floor every time I see it.

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  • John Brown (11/16/2012 3:41:00 PM)

    Nice poem Heather. I trust you have kept 'it'

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  • Simon Odhiambo (8/9/2012 1:35:00 AM)

    A poet like a journalist knows not to keep a secret. It will be vented out somehow in bits in other poems.

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  • King Big Head (6/26/2012 6:08:00 AM)

    My servants are good at keeping secrets,
    they know I'm the best so they want to keep
    their king happy. Nothing to do with them
    losing their heads. It's because they love me.

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  • Juan Olivarez (6/20/2012 9:57:00 AM)

    well penned indeed, but such secrets only bring sorrow take care.

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  • marvin brato (6/12/2012 10:48:00 PM)

    Well-penned, a secret is meant not to be told!

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  • Alex Medina (6/12/2012 5:56:00 AM)

    I know exactly how you feel. Relatable write.

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  • Captain Cur (6/11/2012 7:01:00 PM)

    Heather, you can tell me.
    I promise not to tell.
    You can trust a Pirate!
    So where is that treasure buried?

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  • Romeo Della Valle (6/11/2012 6:20:00 PM)

    It is very hard to keep a secret but it can be done! When it comes to real friendship, one must live up his or her word! A thought provoking write! Thank you for sharing Heather and keep inspiring the World with your touching works! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-NYC

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