A Secret Of Nature! (Truth Hurts) Poem by Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)

A Secret Of Nature! (Truth Hurts)

Rating: 4.8


here comes the moon,
cheating with the stars when the sun is not arround,
however, it is a marriage that was never atall meant to be,
because the sun comes back home everymorning,
only to find that the moon is nowhere to be found,

the sun being the victim of hurt pain and resentment,
because everytime it comes back from a late shift,
expecting the dearly wife (The Moon)
to welcome him home with warmth and love, because alone the sun cannot create warmth for itself,

but reality is
the sun loves the monn!
the moon loves the stars,
and the stars are known to be the third party,

that which will always remain in the sun's heart (The Moon)
shall never be viewed by his eyes,
and for the love of the moon
it hurts!

the poor sun keeps coming back home,
hoping that the moon had come back,
but me, you, and i know exactly that reality is the truth that hurts,
because the sun will never see the moon again,
because he has never seen him before
he was never loved from the start
henceforth the resentment

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Swetha Vanakayalapati 22 June 2012

:) ........mmm.......still? ? ...oh thats rather a true grief song! ! its a beautiful concept you hv interwoven....spectacular ! !

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 23 November 2011

kulena mfana bewuphethe ukotini ukrosha, wenza esihle isibhalala lesi! ! ! ....ha haha!

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(De Va) 09 November 2011

I really like this poem, but....I so often see the sun and moon together, but never the sun and stars...so...it seems that the moon cheats on the stars with the sun...hmmmm...is so very thought provoking..ty for a beautiful write....blessings...deva

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Soulistical The Poet 18 October 2011

ha ha ha WOW! WOW! you kept me thinking, :) :) :) :) :)

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Adeline Foster 06 October 2011

True, true, woven into a very deep poem. read mine, - Home Is - Adeline

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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
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