A Secret Place Poem by Sossi Khachadourian

hey nice imagination..gud write...

Between life and death There's another path Some of us choose to live there Away from life there's another place for broken hearts, what an imagination great write!

Between life and death There's anotherpath Some of us choose to live there Away from life there's another place for broken hearts A secret place!

nice and so much fun to read......enjoyed this very much.... please read my poems and leave your opinion

favorite lines: Away from life there's another place for broken hearts A secret place that helps tired souls to find the peace within their selves................. i think there are a few English 'errors' in the poem, but since you use four languages some days, i guess i can't expect perfection in English. Actually my English is not 'perfect' and i've used (almost) only English to speak and write and read for over 65 years! ! :) the concept of a secret place, used for a special purpose, will be appealing to many. i just bury my head in a bowl of ice cream or a box of pizza [if my mate allows it; she doesn't! : ( ]. bri :) to MyPoemList

Thoughts and regrets all meet there The place where I open the gate to meet the present with past Away from crowd near to the God not dead or alive The secret place its the loneliness to meet ourselves Away from lovers aches

Between life and death There's another path Some of us choose to live there Away from life there's another place for broken hearts A secret place that helps tired souls to find the peace within their selves

I like this poem a lot, it says a lot about you, personally and in Character. You like to escape from the world you have molded around yourself, the men, the problems, the introvert in you hiding away from the extrovert. Well done you....

Awesome emotional poem I like it fabulously chosen words