Sossi Khachadourian


A Secret Place - Poem by Sossi Khachadourian

Between life and death
There's another path
Some of us choose to live there
Away from life there's another place for broken hearts
A secret place that helps tired souls to find the peace within their selves
Thoughts and regrets all meet there
The place where I open the gate to meet the present with past
Away from crowd near to the God not dead or alive
The secret place its the loneliness to meet ourselves
Away from lovers aches
But with the memories no way to disregard to escape free
The secret place there I open my hidden aches
Away from blamers glance
My bloody wounds there take a bit rest


Comments about A Secret Place by Sossi Khachadourian

  • Freshman - 554 Points James Fitzpatrick (1/6/2015 9:00:00 PM)

    I like this poem a lot, it says a lot about you, personally and in Character. You like to escape from the world you have molded around yourself, the men, the problems, the introvert in you hiding away from the extrovert. Well done you.... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 110 Points Loulou Saraf (12/13/2014 7:47:00 AM)

    Awesome emotional poem I like it fabulously chosen words (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 110 Points Loulou Saraf (12/13/2014 7:40:00 AM)

    Away from blamers glance
    My bloody wounds there take a bit rest (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 110 Points Loulou Saraf (12/13/2014 7:38:00 AM)

    Away from blamers glance
    My bloody wounds there take a bit rest (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,389 Points Soul Watcher (10/29/2014 8:07:00 AM)

    nice and so much fun to read......enjoyed this very much.... please read my poems and leave your opinion (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Larra Papazian (11/1/2012 2:53:00 PM)

    Between life and death
    There's anotherpath
    Some of us choose to live there
    Away from life there's another place for broken hearts
    A secret place! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Larra Papazian (11/1/2012 2:28:00 PM)

    Between life and death There's another path Some of us choose to live there Away from life there's another place for broken hearts, what an imagination great write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie A B (10/23/2012 12:38:00 AM)

    hey nice imagination..gud write... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 22, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 23, 2012


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