Treasure Island

yolandey breedt

(1987/05/04 / south africa)

A Secret Room


in a room deep inside
you will find a special feeling
that i cant seem to hide
as it gives life a new meaning

the walls are bloody red
yet it seems to be realy comfortable
and i cant seem to get this person out of my head
making the ways of living realy motivational

in this place the secret im keeping
is you and you are forever locked in my heart
the key you will keep on seeking
as i have felt this way from the start

you may never know
the way i feel about you
and each day this emotion tends to grow
my only wish is that you could see that you are my dream come true

so as my note reachs its end
please keep in mind you are my desire
so to you this passionate kiss i send
with a hope that i could become your everlasting fire

Submitted: Tuesday, March 04, 2014
Edited: Tuesday, March 04, 2014

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

this is a poem i wrote as a favor to my sister so she could send it and expres
how she feel about her first love

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