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Matthew Petranovich

Rookie - 29 Points (5/11/93 / Utah)

A Sick And Twisted Mind In A Rhyme


A sick and twisted mind,
turned by time,
becomes a new story in a twisted rhyme
Come along and read it don't cost a dime


Little Red Ridding Hood
Walking through the woods
The wolf,
mouth drooling,
up to good
Now Little Red dropped a piece of candy
With a jump and sprawl,
her face was in his jaws.
He started shaking breaking her neck,
skin started to tear apart,
and the muscles started to bleed.
The wolf was walking off with her head in his mouth,
Rage in his eyes
He was suprised that
he did succeed.

A sick and twisted mind,
turned by time,
becomes a new story in a twisted rhyme
Come along and read it, it don't cost a dime

Hansel and Gretel got left on a bridge,
scary place,
chilly like a fridge,
Owls howling in the moonlight.
They're so scared,
But they see a bright light,
The ginger bread house,
In it an old witch quiet as a mouse,
As they walk up,
She walks out
Now she invites them to eat the couch
While their back is turned she grabs an axe
Now from behind their skulls are cracked
she starts chopping wack wack wack,
Into the stew their meat goes,
it is so yummy to an old raggity hoe

A sick and twisted mind,
turned by time,
becomes a new story in a twisted rhyme
Come along and read it don't cost a dime

Jack told Jill to come play a game,
When they got up the hill,
He stabbed a knife in her brain,
Her eyes fled in the back of her head.
He pushed her down the well
her body falling dead


A sick and twisted mind,
turned by time,
becomes a new story in a twisted rhyme
Come along and read it don't cost a dime

Alice fell down a rabbit hole into a scary room,
blood on the walls
a wicked gloom
and on the floor
a dead white rabbit
the red queen loves it
killing is her habit
Alice opens the door
the queen was waiting now
Alice can't feel anymore
The cheshire cat watching the gore
He licks the blood of the dead
Then disappears with nothing said.

A sick and twisted mind,
turned by time,
becomes a new story in a twisted rhyme
Come along and read it don't cost a dime

(I Know Gruesome Sorry,
Just trying to make something
cooler than just love poems.
Just added a second part.
Sick and Twisted Mind In a Rhyme II.
If y'all liked this one,
check it out.)

Submitted: Wednesday, November 03, 2010
Edited: Sunday, May 20, 2012

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  • Rookie Amber Lawrence (2/27/2012 10:46:00 PM)

    omfg i so love the darker side of the normal childs imagethis is how i wrote must of my life many think how dark and twisted i was but the point is lifes more then giggles and love infact most ends in blood covered bones (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amparo Roldan (1/23/2012 6:46:00 PM)

    This is so original! Never expected such a crazy and dark poem to even be one of my liking. Sincere congratulations. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Silentpoet Grl (10/30/2011 7:53:00 AM)

    Really descriptive and dark. Very imaginative and you are right, gruesome! A really strong poem - Great Job! (Report) Reply

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