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A simple journey

oh how sweet are the words from your lips
the words full of hope and promises
oh how sweet to hear those whispers
whispers with jokes and naughty phrase...

am i still the apple of your eyes?
the princess of your life?
am i still the goddess of love?
the only woman who owns your heart? ..

lord, bless me coz i love this man
teach me to create words of love
help me to reach his lonely heart
bring these words to fill his empty life...

who are you to blame me
who are they to condemn
who am i to refuse
the love of this powerful man...

clouds may cover the sun
darkness may fill our day
thorns may spread at night
night of heroic play.

Submitted: Sunday, May 31, 2009
Edited: Tuesday, June 02, 2009


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  • Manuel Odeny (8/27/2009 8:22:00 AM)

    A simple journey of love, the idea of love and trusr simply written
    Good play of words to arose filling:
    'clouds may cover the sun
    darkness may fill our day
    thorns may spread at night
    night of heroic play.'
    ++10

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/17/2009 7:36:00 PM)

    who are you to blame me
    who are they to condemn
    who am i to refuse
    the love of this powerful man... magnificen inter weaving of words withpowerful imaginery thought bases onreal feeling..hats off dear....10

    read mine 'blame me' real neighbour......

  • rago rago (7/6/2009 9:36:00 PM)

    it is simple and so fine and read...............let the journey reach to paradise.........

  • Cristy Upshaw (6/22/2009 11:18:00 AM)

    very elegant and beautifully written. such an endearing journey indeed.

  • Ronald Doku (6/22/2009 10:41:00 AM)

    really good. i like it alot. great.

  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (6/19/2009 10:55:00 PM)

    a touching you have written.10 shan

  • Nessa Nanaluvzyuh (6/18/2009 7:21:00 PM)

    you are a great poet, i hope you keep on writing
    its truly a beautiful poem. lovely, passionately sweet loved the beginning yet the end even better.

  • Christopher Flynn (6/17/2009 12:37:00 PM)

    It has a nice flow that keeps the reader interested and longing for more.

  • Salu Salu (6/17/2009 2:47:00 AM)

    candid speech........true feelings...magic in writing....
    wish ur journey to a wonderland of episodes.
    rgrds/salu

  • Maia Padua (6/16/2009 6:42:00 AM)

    very nice....touching
    flowing with grace and love...
    very impressive...
    very poetic..i love the way your thoughts framed into poetry
    thanks for inviting
    10+++++++

    maia

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