A Simple No To Relation Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Simple No To Relation

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She wanted to end the relation
She had her simple calculation
How can I equate you with deserter?
All along you were my guide and master

There were no clouds in the sky
It was painful to understand, why?
Why you could not face me and felt shy?
Was it futile attempt not worth to try?

I didn’t send me any surprise
I knew it no tag or high price
It created doubts and new room to rise
It was to be absorbed in self as steps very wise

She may have her reasons and fear
She may be passing through agony and tears
I failed to understand why I was simple pick?
Was I to be driven away from life without stick?

She did follow it with simple logic
I failed to deliver lovely music
Was my admission of love not a magic?
Was that not bonding of relation as strategic?

I shouldn’t dwell at length what the love is?
It is peaceful means to live at ease
Whole world is at your feet with no compulsion
The life is ever green and end of spring is out of question

Sudden emergence of dark clouds immediately threaten
Panic with shock signals is seen and felt very often
General sense will disappear and you will be struck
You will curse the almighty and very often the bad luck

I received the flowers with simple note
She might have attempted so much but nothing wrote
I found no good smell or fragrance in flowers
They were there as if untimely rain with showers

I glanced through all corners and found nothing
I expected that it may contain or have something
It bore nothing except flowers of yesterdays
I did forecast the danger in coming days


I sincerely prayed God not to end the link
It was so holy for me and not to think
My eyes had no sleep for days without any wink
I was about to collapse and going so deep to sink

She was made to believe that I may desert her
It was all done by her relatives and sister
It never struck to my mind in early days
I thought of it in seriously in approaching ways

I gazed through window to find her with rose
What does that mean with new style or pose?
I sensed no trouble and rushed to embrace
She did not waste time and offered smile on face

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Nwagwu 13 March 2010

her smile says it all, doesn't it - well worth all the waiting and languishing and doubting and forsaking and.....

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Christopher Tiganescu 17 March 2010

well done very nice painted a picture in my head u have down well keep writng

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L J Storm 16 March 2010

Well done, an insightful account of the most complex of emotions.

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Christopher Tiganescu 16 March 2010

Very Nice very well written, keep on writing

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Manonton Dalan 13 March 2010

it could be she has somebody or you have somebody. a broken glass can't be fix but dissolve. fire will only last for sometime. thanks, you can visit my poems too.md

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Indira Renganathan 13 March 2010

A common happening in real life well said....interestingly a nice reading

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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