A Single Tear Poem by SinJace Ramos

A Single Tear

Rating: 3.3


My spirit's strong
But my heart is weak
As a single tear
Rolls down my cheek

It doesn't matter
Which way I go
I'm not able
To leave this hole

The load I carry
Seems to grow
It's weighing down
On my soul

Happiness seems
An allusive dream
In the opposite side
Of the stream

When is it
That we decide
To let go
No longer try

Somehow I must
Accept my fate
To only dream
While I'm awake

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 17 March 2012

A very powerful and well crafted write that clearly shows your emotions and poetic talent! I can identify with it 100%! I felt like that when I wrote the poem titled: Invisible Tears.. This amazing write deserves a 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 28 July 2011

your first stanza is very strong it defines it all it explains everything and i see the scene that is painted int the whole poem nice

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Abhay Vignesh L 06 March 2011

powerful and symbolic poetry.

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