A Slender Bender All The Way Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

A Slender Bender All The Way

Rating: 5.0


A slender bender all the way
The crew got right
Into the mood
Fire dancers at door
What more do you need
To get a venue
Sweating under the collar?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 13 September 2009

This verse invites the reader to imagine the Fire Dance in all it's frenzy - - intriguing.

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Seema Chowdhury 13 September 2009

small and nice and ofcourse meaningful.

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Luwi Habte 26 September 2009

nice and great piece luwi

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Noel Horlanda 18 September 2009

although there are only five lines it connotes a tale or story perhaps about fire dancers or magicians, men who walks on glowing embers whatever. It encouraged you to think what's it all about. Good write....

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Anjali Sinha 17 September 2009

wow fire dances reminds me of some aboriginal dance good write---

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Eyan Desir 17 September 2009

Interesting write 10s

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Antonio Liao 13 September 2009

a piece of words, invoke the magic of a poetry.......very dazzling in memory and irresistible in view.....perfect for every mood that linger in the shadow of the past.....a reflective of the soul...thank you for sharing....a 10 +++

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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