Sally Plumb Plumb

Freshman - 533 Points (23 9 1940 / Haverhill Suffolk England)

A Slow Smoke Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb


She could hear the piano
playing as slow
as his seductive fingers.
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Comments about this poem (A Slow Smoke by Sally Plumb Plumb )

  • Gold Star - 6,967 Points Bri Edwards (2/8/2015 4:42:00 PM)

    oh, i get it. smoke....cigarette. THIS ONE is not too complicated for me, though i do wonder if there is a Felis catus among us, or if the 'feline' is only Sally!

    i think i too would close MY eyes if a burning stick were hanging out of my mouth!

    i liked fingers and lingering so near one another. :) bri (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,734 Points Susan Lacovara (5/1/2014 6:11:00 PM)

    Reminiscent of a Casablanca backdrop...I love your write and can almost hear the music quarrying last my own slightly cracked open window....PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Halls (8/12/2013 2:48:00 PM)

    Talking about smoke gets in your eyes Sally check out my poem Woodbine Willie see what you think.
    Remember Woodbines? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 124 Points James Timothy Jarrett (1/6/2013 10:36:00 PM)

    That last one was from my wife. Prompting a feline to stalk the shadows. WTF? I bow down. Beautiful poem, I must read more. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 124 Points James Timothy Jarrett (1/6/2013 10:28:00 PM)

    Oh Yes Sally Plumb Plumb I /we call it Crater Lake Oregon. We call it the giver of wine. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 55 Points John Brown (1/5/2013 6:14:00 AM)

    Nice piece Sally. The style reminds me a little of a poem by D.H. Lawrence called 'Piano' - have you read it? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points Danny Draper (4/20/2012 9:40:00 AM)

    A great evocative piece with beautiful atmospheric tones to paint for the senses a memory of tranquility. A fine eloquent work. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,652 Points Dave Walker (4/12/2012 4:48:00 PM)

    Really love this, a fantastic poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (7/4/2010 6:07:00 AM)

    Could feel the atmosphere of the write, draws you in as you read! Great work! ; D (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ian Bowen (7/3/2010 4:38:00 PM)

    Sally, a well worked piece. Written with style.
    Regards,
    Ian (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 103 Points John Thorkild Ellison (7/1/2010 11:26:00 AM)

    I like it, very atmospheric! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Raj Arumugam (3/11/2010 9:43:00 PM)

    ah, the words flow smoothly as in a song... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ivor Hogg (4/23/2009 4:01:00 AM)

    you evoke an image I am famiiar with that moment of relaxation induced by a much needed cigarette presented in flawless poeticprose (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Connetta jean VanMatre (3/14/2009 8:47:00 AM)

    really like the style of theis poem. good work (Report) Reply



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