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(23 9 1940 / Haverhill Suffolk England)

A Slow Smoke

She could hear the piano
playing as slow
as his seductive fingers.
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  • Kevin Halls (8/12/2013 2:48:00 PM)

    Talking about smoke gets in your eyes Sally check out my poem Woodbine Willie see what you think.
    Remember Woodbines?

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  • James Timothy Jarrett (1/6/2013 10:36:00 PM)

    That last one was from my wife. Prompting a feline to stalk the shadows. WTF? I bow down. Beautiful poem, I must read more.

  • James Timothy Jarrett (1/6/2013 10:28:00 PM)

    Oh Yes Sally Plumb Plumb I /we call it Crater Lake Oregon. We call it the giver of wine.

  • John Brown (1/5/2013 6:14:00 AM)

    Nice piece Sally. The style reminds me a little of a poem by D.H. Lawrence called 'Piano' - have you read it?

  • Danny Draper (4/20/2012 9:40:00 AM)

    A great evocative piece with beautiful atmospheric tones to paint for the senses a memory of tranquility. A fine eloquent work.

  • Dave Walker (4/12/2012 4:48:00 PM)

    Really love this, a fantastic poem.

  • Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (7/4/2010 6:07:00 AM)

    Could feel the atmosphere of the write, draws you in as you read! Great work! ; D

  • Ian Bowen (7/3/2010 4:38:00 PM)

    Sally, a well worked piece. Written with style.
    Regards,
    Ian

  • John Thorkild Ellison (7/1/2010 11:26:00 AM)

    I like it, very atmospheric!

  • Raj Arumugam (3/11/2010 9:43:00 PM)

    ah, the words flow smoothly as in a song...

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