A Smile With Agenda! Poem by Vanessa Hughes

A Smile With Agenda!

Rating: 4.6


From where I sat,
It felt real
For a while

From where I stood,
It felt pure
Your smile

From where I thought.
It felt good
Your grin

From where I felt,
It was joy
Deep within

But as your smile held hidden agenda
Mine got sent back marked 'Return to sender'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Virginia Pecho Gely 07 January 2012

With the modern technologies nowadays, this poem is a virtuel longin' to a real beginning of an encounter. Love it, Vanessa. Continue your work of art of rhyme and pen.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 30 January 2012

Wow! beautiful poem Vanessa...i enjoyed reading it.

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Captain Cur 03 May 2012

Slam-dunk! I mean walk the plank!

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Philip Jose 20 June 2011

irony with a genuine agenda , really nice. i, myself use to recieve such smiles, and i too use to give such smiles

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Stan Petrovich 10 July 2011

Most of the comments I read about your Agenda poem were too absurd to accept as much more than hoaxes. Poets are really crazy, and hold no hope for any agenda but saving themselves with psychiatry's aid.

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Aqua Flower 22 March 2019

A cleverly written poem. I like the way you write!

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Leslie Sharp 24 October 2014

Sadness! Something I felt one two many times. Remember the greatest love you can find is you self.

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Adeline Foster 29 January 2014

Loved it, loved it, loved it! Format was Brilliant. O course I can’t top it, but try mine – Indebted – Adeline

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Ruth Walters 15 January 2013

another hot verse......false smiles, you never know where you are with them

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Paul Brookes 22 December 2012

Great poem.............................. : : O)

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