A Song Poem by Jordan Legaspi

A Song

Rating: 5.0


I stood and watched who passes by
Bumping and hurting I don’t know why
Some time “hi” and “hello” then smile
All the passers I saw end up to sigh
Some touched each style and fashion
While others put colors and dust into it
The talisman hanging on their breast
Then few without there hold and control
Shoulder to shoulder they fall
Angels like to catch the fallen kisses
Of them who loved and hoped for lies
The whole damn lovers play on that place

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 July 2010

Flip side of jilted love portrayed in metaphorical flab …excellent Sir … thanks for sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Marieta Maglas 26 September 2009

interesting poem, lovely to read...........10

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Obinna Eruchie 25 September 2009

Vivid, but interesting to read.

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Eyan Desir 23 September 2009

the poem is deep really leaves the reader pondering tens

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 09 September 2009

Well expressed poem: 'Angels like to catch the fallen kisses'.

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Jordan Legaspi

Jordan Legaspi

Davao City, Philippines
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