GoodGuy Lost


A Song About Losing Yourself.... - Poem by GoodGuy Lost

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the maddening pace of my thoughts
makes me want to scream.
i dont really know what i want now,
i dont know what it means.
cuz iam here alone now,
and once again my mind,
is blazing with that fire,
the one and only kind.
the kind that burns all my thoughts,
into my memory,
the kind that burns with passion,
until i cannot breathe....
i cannot remember,
what it means to feel, because i havent had the
chance to see whats real.
i have felt the heartache,
that cripples many souls,
and i cannot just remember,
for how much mine i sold.


Comments about A Song About Losing Yourself.... by GoodGuy Lost

  • Rookie Nicole Ho (5/10/2009 9:30:00 AM)

    cannot remember,
    what it means to feel, because i havent had the
    chance to see whats real.
    i have felt the heartache,
    that cripples many souls,
    and i cannot just remember,
    for how much mine i sold.


    ^ wow i really love that.
    you're amazing (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Rumor Red (5/1/2009 10:08:00 PM)

    AMAZING! ! ! !
    Good write. keep them coming. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sunset moonshine (4/24/2009 7:26:00 PM)

    I LOVE IT! ! ! !
    End of Story

    *(*_*) * (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 23, 2009



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