A Song Of Hearts Calling Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

A Song Of Hearts Calling

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my hearts song for you is pure love
music without words
they fade into you
the way water pours into a stream
my voice in this song, soft
catches you hypnotically
filling your mind
I caress you with my song
my love
like fingers
making you smoother
somehow
as if my call were shaping you
close your eyes and remember
as the voice quiets you
it is familiar, that melody
sung for you the instant
trembling fingers touched my soul
the voice rose to a climax
almost a hymn for the sleeping

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Peter Lebuhn 11 February 2006

10x100 on this Eila You have captured the pure soul of what love is. The feeling. I pictured these words being said to me and they were alive Very good work :) Namaste Peter plebuhn@hotmail.com

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